To help get you started, this video provides some good examples of literary thesis statements.
The following video provides guidance and tips for writing a comparative thesis statement.
Outline Example
I. Introduction
A. Try to begin your Intro in a way that will encourage readers to want to read more.
B. Name the work and author you will be covering. Discuss the issue, possibly even give a brief synopsis, and how it plays into your argument.
C. Clearly state your thesis. The thesis statement will outline the concepts covered in the body of the paper.
II. Body
A. Begin body paragraphs with a topic sentence. A topic sentence will outline what the paragraph will present.
B. Provide analysis and evidence from the text to backup your argument.
C. Have a closing sentence at the end of each body paragraph that transitions into your next paragraph.
III. Conclusion
A. Summarize your main points.
B. Demonstrate why your argument is important.
C. Have at least one sentence to wrap up.
It can be helpful to focus on one aspect of revision at a time. Here are a few tips for breaking revision up into manageable steps:
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